Peer Review – Introduction Paragraphs

southam geography game

  1. Log in to Google Classroom, and click on the announcement titled “Peer Review – Nigeria Introduction Paragraph.”
  2. Complete the assignment you find there. Mr. Muniz will explain how to complete the peer review with the entire class.
  3. After you complete the peer review, click THIS LINK.  You will need to type in the BRAZIL Introduction Paragraph you completed for Week 14 Homework.
  4. When you are finished typing in your paragraph, click THIS LINK to practice South American geography by playing an online game.  Remember:  you are allowed to use Google Maps to help you find the answers!

 

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83 responses to “Peer Review – Introduction Paragraphs

  1. The counterclaim was hard for me because

  2. the hardest part of writing a introduction paragraph is when you have to find something that the person your arguing with might say

  3. The hard part for me was seeing how i could put it in my own words because i dont really know much about brazil.

  4. The hardest part of the paragraph of the homework was I did not now wate to do and wate to write.

  5. my hardest part is part 2 becouse i dont know about brazil

  6. The hardest part of my essay was the whole paragraph because i didn’t understand it.

  7. I think giving some information about the 3 main subjects was the most difficult for me because i don’t know what information to use. And which one has the most to do with the whole paragraph.

  8. the homework was easy there was no difficult part to it

  9. Well it depends actually, Because if there isnt no steps and nothing to follow then it is very difficult. But if there is steps to follow or directions then it is easy. For me it was easy 🙂

  10. when you have to explain why you picked that one and not the other one because they can both be really good answers and its hard to chose.

  11. I find picking the best claim is difficult because i forget to add the correct things into it.

  12. i didn’t do it

  13. It was pretty easy because all the directions were clear and i wrote it. Also I feel like the thing we had to write about were also clear and easy. I got the paragraph done it in under thirty minutes.

  14. I find that organization of an introduction paragraph is the most difficult to me

  15. The only part i kind of found difficult was the part when we have to answer the question and give to examples. It was difficult when i was writing the paragraph but how i understand more.

  16. I need still learn.

  17. I found it hard trying to find evidence about east oakland because brazil and the favelas had a lecture note for evidence to find a quote that explains my reasons about east oakland.

  18. The most difficult part of writing a introduction paragraph is how to write the first sentence.

  19. i did not get to do the paragraph cuz some idiot took my binder and turned it in into the 9th grade office, therefore, i need more time because it went missing for almost the whole week last week.

  20. The part that was hard was when I had to explain the different between the two because they are both bad places.

  21. the hardest part was the thing about brazil cuz i didnt know much about it

  22. The hardest part of the big question is combining brazil to oakland because i never been out there.

  23. The part that i find difficult is the conclusion,I say that because at the end of my paragraphs i always run out of things to say and when i say “in conclusion” i just basically write what i just said.

  24. It was hard to start the introduction paragraph. I didnt really start it.

  25. the part on the introduction paragraph that was difficult was trynna compare and contrast, like whats in a favela and whats goes on in it, and then east oakland i had to do the same thing.but other than that it was easy for me to do

  26. The part that was the most difficult on the introduction paragraph was step3. Since we did not do the yes/no thing we did when we wrote the nigerian introduction paragraph, it was hard for me to find 2 reasons, even by using notes.

  27. The part of the introduction paragraph that is the most difficult for me is step one because it was hard to write one thing that i know about each of the three topics.It wasn’t that hard because the instructions were really clear .

  28. I don’t think that anything was difficult because i understood most of my work so it was pretty easy.i don’t have a reason why it was easy.

  29. The introduction paragraph is really easy for me, because in middle school we used to always write essays, so for me introduction paragraph is nothing. I’m used to doing them a lot so I know how to do them and they’re just really easy.

  30. i think the hardest part of writing an introduction is starting the first sentence and writing a hook to engage the readers attention.

  31. the difficult part of writing my paragraph was writing about oakland with detail even though i know so much about it it was still difficult.

  32. i didn’t do it so it was all easy

  33. The part I found most difficult to write in the Introduction paragraph was the beginning because I didn’t know how to start off.

  34. I think the hardest part of writing an introduction is writing the counter sentence because you got to find a piece of evidence to go with the sentence about the opposite view

  35. I find giving examples hard because I don’t know if i should give lots of information or not because if I do then i won’t have anything else to say further more into the essay.

  36. The most difficult is watching the video and analyze it, because i’m paying attention to the video no what i’m about to write or I get distracted writing some thing and then another answer passes though and i miss it.

  37. The part that was most difficult was actually getting it out of my backpack and doing the assignment .

  38. The hardest part for me was starting the paragraph and finishing the paragraph

  39. the hardest thing i say is when i write the theme and the claim because we have to make our ideas.

  40. The hardest part of writing an introduction paragraph is how to start of the paragraph and also the hardest is what kind of information to add

  41. I think that the hardest part of writing an introduction is writing the counter sentence because you got to find a piece of evidence to go with the sentence about the opposite view

  42. The part of the introduction paragraph that was the most difficult for me was the background information, because I wasn’t sure what kind of information from my notes I should use, and if it went along with the paragraph.

  43. The most difficult was trying to focus; I didn’t finish so im going to do it at lunch for some points not all I also could try harder like going to power hour but i can’t because i have to go to a program on tue., wed., thur..

  44. the most challenging part of the paragraph essay was getting started and keeping on track and it was hard to finish because it was hard for me to focus on it.

  45. All of the part of the homework was hard I could understand it.

  46. I find most difficult when starting my introduction paragraph and finishing my introduction paragraph.

  47. The most difficult part of writing is finding the evidence and catching the readers attention.

  48. The part that was most difficult was including more to the paragraph.And thinking of what to write in the paragraph.Another is the steps.Also the big question was confusing at first.

  49. i find the cer part the hardest thing because some of the i couldnt find no evidence and organization

  50. I find all of it difficult.I’m not good at making paragraphs I would usually make it by how i understand it but with all the work I do it is hard to make a paragraph.I’m more of a math type of guy or exploring.If I write a paragraph it would take me 20 to 30 minutes because I don’t understand any of it.

  51. For me the most difficult part when writing an introduction paragraph is finding the examples and starting a counter claim. It is most hardest for me because I have to think carefully of the examples that I give because I will have to explain it after I give the example.

  52. The most difficult part in the introduction paragraph would be explaining my answers and putting all my ideas together. It is difficult for me because I have to explain it in a good way to understand what im saying.

  53. The most difficult part of a introduction paragraph is the beginning because its kind of hard for me to start a one person conversation, especially by writing and i dont like writing

  54. i still need to learn on how to explian a envrminent econmy.

  55. The part that was more difficult to me about the introducing paragraph is part 2 because it was asking me to say what others would say and i was confused so i couldn’t do it but then i got it and did it

  56. I didn’t write It because I was absent for two days. I’m sorry, but I will need you too sign a paper for It to be excused. Why? You ask, well I have a dentist note. So I will come back during lunch okay… okay lets get on with the show.

  57. well for me the most difficult part of the introduction paragraph was how to start off my sentence also the the part where we had to write what the other person perspective thinks about the question

  58. I think that the most difficult part of writing an introduction paragraph is being able to catch the readers attention.

  59. the part that was most difficult about the introduction paragraph was writing what someone else would say because you have to think about what they would say and explain it

  60. In writing a paragraph I find the claim, thesis more difficult to write because trying to figure out which one is more easier or harder to make

  61. The part i found most difficult was step 3 because i don’t know what 2 examples i could give

  62. The most difficult part of writing the introduction was when it asked what I know about Brazil but at the time i didn´t know to much until i researched it.

  63. One part thats difficult for me to write a introduction paragraph is to start the sentence. But everything else is okay i guess its really not that hard.

  64. When writing an introduction paragraph the part i find more difficult is when i have to think about what others may say against my answer. And when i have to compare two things to get my answer. Those two are what i think is the hardest part of writing an introduction.

  65. The only part i kind of found difficult was the part when we have to answer the question and give two examples. It was difficult when i was writing the paragraph but now i understand it more.

  66. I think the most difficult part is the hook and writing the claim. I think they are the hardest part of the Introduction paragraph because you have to get the readers interest and attention so that he or she will stay engaged.

  67. I think that the hardest sentence from the homework yesterday was the last sentence were we had to put our opinion. It was hard for me because i’m behind on the work so I don’t really know why people would not want to live in a favela and it frustrated me

  68. the introduction of the introduction paragraph is the hard part for me.

  69. When I write an introduction paragraph, I find it difficult to gather the evidence to make the introduction paragraph. It is fun to write introduction paragraphs though, I like to do my Humanities homework, it’s a fun challenge.

  70. The hard part of doing a Introduction Paragraph is starting the paragraph.

  71. i think it was a little hard but i dident fineshed

  72. The most difficult part in my opinion is starting the writing cause its like you don’t know how to start off.

  73. The hardest part on writing a introduction paragraph is on ending it. I usually have a hard time putting information at the end.

  74. The most difficult in my paragraph is the Brazil because some of the people in brazil are poor and they can’t even afford water and electricity because they dont have no money to buy them. And theres alot of crimes.

  75. The part of writing an introduction paragraph that is most difficult is beginning it. Now that I know the steps it’s not so hard, but when I first did it it, I didn’t know how to start it.

  76. The most difficult part of writing is to explain the people who are agree with one part and the others who disagree…Also I haven’t had a chance to learn about the introduction how to use sentences start.

  77. The most difficult part of the introduction paragraph is that when you got
    to say why will this argue with someone about your evidence you got to say why they saying that and why they disagreed.

  78. The most difficult about the introduction paragraph is finding about the subjects. Sometimes its hard because you dint know about the subjects and you will get stuck. Another difficult thing about the introduction paragraph is explaining what goes against you that whats one thing that you know why yours is wrong than the other.

  79. the most hard thing to do a introduction is to is to explaining my answer for the to the question and providing 2 example.

  80. The most difficult part in my opinion on writing an introduction paragraph would be coming up with two distinct reasons to support your opinions. I find that the most troubling as I usually just base my second reason off of my first making them very similar to each other and making it so my paragraph isn’t as strong as i would like it to be.

  81. I actually found it all confusing because when we first did it I had you to help me throughout the whole thing so I really never did it on my own so now that I have to do it by myself I really don’t know what to do

  82. Personally writing an introduction paragraph is really easy.

  83. The hardest part of the homework was number 1 because i dint really know nothing about brazil so i could not tell what is poor to them

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